Monday, March 1, 2010

The Thunder Men from Mars (Create-a-story)


Once upon a time there was call to the Thunder Men which were from Mars. The man on the phone was shouting ''Emergency! Emergency! This is London calling. We are being destroyed by Heatblast, Help! Now he is in your secret lab.”

''But we don't have a lab'', said Mike. ''He means the underground defence network!” replied his friend Philip. ''Now let's go and rescue them''. During the night, the Thunder Men from Mars walked into the underground lab and ran to the big door were they had the enormous screen. They went into the small room and switched on the automatic screen. They saw him taking the blue crystal. After a while they were feeling hungry and thirsty but they had locked the front door and so had to suffer an ordeal of hunger and thirst. Then they used their harpoon to take of the fish in the river which was called ''The River of Underground'', they crossed the river safely and used their amazing power of thunder to break the door and fortunately they saw Heatblast taking the crystal just in time so they fired thunder at him. Then Philip ordered Mike, ''Take the crystal'' so he grabbed it as fast as a cheetah. Then they calmly called the police.

The police took Heatblast to the cell. The police thanked Philip and Mike, the Thunder Men from Mars for their great help. Then Heatblast, from the cell, lay down his head and said ''I will never mess with the Thunder Men again!'' THE END


Andrea Schembri

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